The Power of Parallel Structure: CELPIP Writing Task 1
Parallel structure (also called parallelism) means using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance. This helps make your writing clearer, more balanced, and much more efficient, which is important in CELPIP writing. You can see the reasons below, but first, let’s see some examples:
One of the most effective way to use parallel structure is a sentence is by making a list like:
A, B, and C…
In these lists, all three items, A, B, and C should be in the SAME grammatical form. For example, they could all be nouns, verbs, adjectives or phrases.
Here are some everyday examples:
Grammatical form | Sample |
Verb/Noun: | Our company needs to increase productivity, reduce costs, and hire more staff if we want to be competitive next year. |
Comparative adjectives: | The new phone is thinner, faster, and more powerful than previous models. |
Prepositional Phrases: | She looked everywhere for her keys: under the bed, on her desk, and even in the refrigerator, but still couldn’t find them. |
Why Parallel Structure Helps in CELPIP Task 1:
- Saves Word Count
Writing in a consistent grammatical form (e.g., all verbs in the same tense) helps eliminate redundancy and unnecessary words. - Increases Clarity
Parallel lists are easier to scan and understand quickly, which is ideal for the CELPIP rater who reads your response once or twice. - Improves Flow and Readability
Balanced, rhythmic sentence structures make your writing smoother and more natural, which enhances coherence. - Reduces Errors
Using a consistent structure across list items lowers the chance of making grammatical mistakes (e.g., switching verb tenses or forms). - Highlights Key Ideas
A well-structured list (e.g., “I would suggest offering flexible hours, increasing wages, and improving communication.”) makes your main points stand out clearly. - Demonstrates Language Control
Using parallel structure correctly shows that you have a solid grasp of English grammar—something CELPIP raters value. - Allows for Strategic Word Economy
In Task 1, where you must write 150–200 words, a concise list using parallel structure can present multiple points within one sentence, saving space for explanations or examples.
If you would like to see how to use parallel structure in CELPIP Writing Task 1, contact us at [email protected], and we will send you a sample. |